"Callie!" As she searched around her
for the familiar voice, she quickly covered the evidence with her comforter.
"Who's there?" She
yelled as the shadow of the voice calling her slowly approached and became
visible on the walls of her rose painted room. "I need you to explain this
to me now!"
Callie panicked. She covered her
body with her comforter, trying to disguise all that is hidden beneath. She
grabbed her cellphone and pretended to text.
The shadow approached and was
then at once in front of her.
Callie sighed in relief.
"Don't scare me like that!" She yelled as she swiftly removed the
comforter off herself and the stacks of bills.
Her friend and accomplice laughed
hysterically. "Callie, seriously you need to relax. We are rich now and no
one will ever know how it happened. Our life of being poor and living in the
streets is...?" She paused enthusiastically and waited for Callie to
finish her sentence. Callie stared at her blankly, still recovering from the
frightening moment of believing she was almost caught.
"Our life of being poor and
living in the streets is...?" repeated Sully. When she received no
response, she yelled "Our life of being poor is OVER! Callie, wake up, since
when are you such a punk?"
Callie still didn't respond
instead she threw her head against the pillow and thought of what had just
occurred.
She closed her eyes and suddenly
saw herself there, back at the store. Her and Sully had entered the store
pretending to want to purchase some goods but that was not their intention.
They had robbed over 7 retail and grocery stores in the past 4 months and were
aware of how to portray their act of confused customers.
Sully walked over to the counter
and asked assistance in locating a jar of jelly. Callie then walked slowly
towards the back of the grocery clerk, pointed her gun at his head and demanded
the money be provided to Sully. Sully giggled uncontrollably as she stared at
the panicked expression on the older man's face. He rushed to do as commanded.
With shaking hands, he threw the bills at the open bag Sully held.
Sully always enjoyed these
adventures (as her and Callie called them). Since they met in the homeless
shelter they have been inseparable. They became really good friends and then
decided to leave the homeless shelters and find a way to become rich. They
didn't want to work. Therefore, they both agreed on taking from others what is
not theirs in order to change their lives.
After the first hit they were
hooked. They were intoxicated with having money. They could've stopped but
chose not to.
“Bang, Bang!” Callie shot blindly
as her and Sully escaped out of the store.
The memories of the shots shook
her back to the present time. When Callie opened her eyes, she was consumed
with sadness. She looked around. “Oh no!” she thought as she slowly sat up on
the hard concrete floor she was laying on. “Oh no!” she exhaled again though no
one would have been able to hear her; it was a soft whisper. She sat inside her
nightmare, which was now her reality.
She is no longer 21 years old.
Her dream within a dream was done and now her dark brown eyes adjusted back to
the reality her and Sully would have to live for the rest of their lives. The
greed of money led them to this place and here they will die. Alone, abandoned
and broke.
I *heart* this one. lol =)
ReplyDeleteBut, you already knew that! I love when writer's keep other writer's in suspense!
Lol! Thanks for all your help with it! I appreciate it! This one took a lot of thinking and time, but I have to say I agree with you, it turned out good. :)
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